A Re-Write Announcement

I decided to rewrite what I've written of Dragon Masters (meaning the part one of chapter one that I've already posted). I might end up leaving the one up that I've already posted, and just give the re-write a new title. I decided that I didn't like how i portrayed Nathaniel/Noel (Noel is her real name for those you who read what i posted). See, my idea for the character is a girl who, in order to achieve her destiny as a Dragon Master she has to pretend to be a boy her whole life (Since in the kingdom they live in women aren't valued and no one even believes a girl could be a Dragon Master) and well they way i thought of her, she doesn't mind pretending to be a boy, as, if you read what i already wrote, she flirts with other women (in order to keep up the ruse) but the way i wrote the argument between her and Darius she doesn't like having to lie and hates having to pretend (well she does, but in my concept of her, since she's been doing this her whole life, she doesn't know how to actually be a girl and so she doesn't actually want to tell the truth, at least not yet...) And I've been thinking about it and i just really don't like how contradictory the way i imagined her and how i wrote her into this first chapter is, so yeah, I'm re-writing it (:
Anyway, i doubt it was really necessary to announce it, but i figured i would in case any one ended up getting confused (:

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