Now, for some criticism. Welp, the font for "Fallen Silence" looks good, but the other font looks a little sharp. On your font option, do you have "antialias" selected? That will fix the sharp look it has.
Also, I think "Fallen Silence" is just out of place. I think it would look better without that in all honesty. Also, "scream" is just a little cut off at the bottom.
This is terrifying and intense and quite good, I believe. It sums up how I feel sometimes anyway...nice job. I think it's good the way the face is really pale and kind of faded/indistinct.
Happiness can be found, even in the darkest of times, if one only remembers to turn on the light.
Morbid Dollie
Strawberry (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/06/12 | Reply
I really, really like this a lot, honestly :3
Now, for some criticism. Welp, the font for "Fallen Silence" looks good, but the other font looks a little sharp. On your font option, do you have "antialias" selected? That will fix the sharp look it has.
Also, I think "Fallen Silence" is just out of place. I think it would look better without that in all honesty. Also, "scream" is just a little cut off at the bottom.
I hope this helps and doesn't seem rude ^^;
-those with the biggest hearts hurt the most
Sarasface
Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/06/12 | Reply
This is terrifying and intense and quite good, I believe. It sums up how I feel sometimes anyway...nice job. I think it's good the way the face is really pale and kind of faded/indistinct.
Happiness can be found, even in the darkest of times, if one only remembers to turn on the light.