k here's the colored version

I kinda like the lineart better... I dont know why. I guess cause it leaves more to the imagination.. and you can see the lines better...

my version of alice has black hair...

---something like this was taking place---

Alice- "The queens gaurds! they've seen us! we need to hide someplace!.

Cheshire- " here eat one of these. It'll shrink us and then they'll never be able to spot us.

( they eat the cookies... SHooooM (now theyre giants)

Alice- "WHa! Were giants! now they'll spot us for sure!

Cheshire- "Well there's no need to run... you can just squash them with your huge feet."
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anyways.. I like the stories of alice in wonderland.. but I like to make things diffrent too.. try to give the characters new names.. this could be a new alice..
I like the name Alisa.. that could be the new alice's name...