Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/17/09 | Reply
you finally typed the text ^o^
now it's easier to be read great job!!
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/11/09 | Reply
thnx for the tip!
Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/08/09 | Reply
I really like you story so far^^ But it can be really hard to read at times, even if you dont have any special program to add bubbles in there is a simple solution and its called ms paintXD
Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/06/09 | Reply
i think it's better now ^^
and btw your coloring is great!
Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/02/09 | Reply
i think your writing isn't bold enough. it can be seen, but better if it's more bold ^^
the expressions are great! you can see what the character feels through his/her face
over all i like it!
keep it up!
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/01/09 | Reply
@Mi Chi E:
Sorry about that, the scanner hates me and i'll try a better way to make it visual when I don't have the digital art system
Otakuite | Posted 06/30/09 | Reply
The second page remind me of a comic called Soul Frontier ^x^
Your art is really great but I find a little annoying that everything is wrote by hand =S
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/30/09 | Reply
Thx girl, and it will be more shocking when I make more and kept the story going further
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/30/09 | Reply
Cute~ You did nice on the shadings. ^^ Keep practicing on different poses and perspectives, ok? Gambatte!
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/27/09 | Reply
Go tell your fma fan friends
If you have friends who loves fma, tell them and show it
Senior Otaku++ | Posted 06/26/09 | Reply