minimewlove

Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/08/09 | Reply

lovely card! ^_________^
yokudekimashita!!! *hugs and faves*

killua2512

Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/08/09 | Reply

@saekimidori:

glad to hear that from you
Thank you

killua2512

Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/08/09 | Reply

@sweetdevil:

awww, thank you very much for the comment. I'll take your advice and improve my next works for better qualitative cards/wallies in the future. Thank you sooo much for helping me out with my problems *takes off the hat and bows*

Last edited by killua2512 at 2:56:48 PM EST on December 8, 2009.

sweetdevil

Embracing Insanity (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/08/09 | Reply

I agree with saekimidori concerning the text, I had to squint a bit to work out what was written on the second and third lines. I think it would be better if you made the text a bit bigger, it'd be easier to read.

Secondly, the card is way too sharp. I mean, sharpness has its charm but you shouldn't overuse it. This card is beautiful, but the excessive sharpening makes it look low quality, so you should tone it down. I'm sure it'd be much better.

Anyway, aside from these, I like how you combined the image with the text, and the font you chose (not overly frilly, just elegant). The colors are a big plus and I can just feel the warmth ^^ Good job, keep improving! *thumbs up*

Last edited by sweetdevil at 1:03:02 PM EST on December 8, 2009.