I'm sorry if I come across like as I was mean or something but while I encourage creative ways of using text, this is not looking right.
While typography includes in its definition the art of placing text, it involves a hell of more aspects. Like font choice, tracking and kerning (controlling the space between words and letters, respectively)
What could have better here is that you have used less fancy fonts and placed it right in the middle of the image. A small, not fancy font arranged like the text in this card (obviously not tilted) would have been pretty amazing.
Keep it up.
I am Delin! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/10/11 | Reply
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i refuse to do things like your cousin and everybody else. I have reached 300+ cards(and walls but deleted a lot of them) without using textures. I refuse to be like everyone else
I am Delin! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/09/11 | Reply
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i really dislike when people bring up time into matters, but you are right. I learn things from the top names, a lot. Though i refuse to use brushes and Textures.
I am Delin! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/09/11 | Reply
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i do to. Have you seen the works by Felcie, SakuraDust, Ritona Raito, Tayeta, Hanako Sho, or any of those other big name artists. Those are works that are amazing, the only thing cool about my works are my Quotes
I am Delin! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/09/11 | Reply
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well everyone sucks at first, thats why you practice and keep doin it until you think your getting better. It took me a long time to get to the point im at, and i still suck
I am Delin! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/09/11 | Reply
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Its called Typography, and i wanted to make the text on both sides. I didnt mean for it to look like that, but hey i kinda like it. Looks like text shadows off his hands
xNotUnderstood
I am Delin! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/10/11 | Reply
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i have Italian, Swiss, Irish and that very tiny bit of Indian, Dutch, and English. So i have a lot of European
Don't lose the moon while counting the stars
xNotUnderstood
I am Delin! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/10/11 | Reply
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lol one of my friends that European blood people are stubborn. I have a lot of european blood in me, so i can agree XD
Don't lose the moon while counting the stars
xNotUnderstood
I am Delin! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/10/11 | Reply
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I refuse to do things like others. I like to be differen, thats that and its final!
its hard to convince me other wise, i do things MY way
Don't lose the moon while counting the stars
xNotUnderstood
I am Delin! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/10/11 | Reply
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nah, thats not how i think about it.
Don't lose the moon while counting the stars
xNotUnderstood
I am Delin! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/10/11 | Reply
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oh no you dont sound mean at all ^^
thank you for the help. i will re do this card just as how you described
Don't lose the moon while counting the stars
MFran
~*FABULOUS MAX*~ (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/10/11 | Reply
I'm sorry if I come across like as I was mean or something but while I encourage creative ways of using text, this is not looking right.
While typography includes in its definition the art of placing text, it involves a hell of more aspects. Like font choice, tracking and kerning (controlling the space between words and letters, respectively)
What could have better here is that you have used less fancy fonts and placed it right in the middle of the image. A small, not fancy font arranged like the text in this card (obviously not tilted) would have been pretty amazing.
Keep it up.
xNotUnderstood
I am Delin! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/10/11 | Reply
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i refuse to do things like your cousin and everybody else. I have reached 300+ cards(and walls but deleted a lot of them) without using textures. I refuse to be like everyone else
Don't lose the moon while counting the stars
xNotUnderstood
I am Delin! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/09/11 | Reply
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i really dislike when people bring up time into matters, but you are right. I learn things from the top names, a lot. Though i refuse to use brushes and Textures.
Don't lose the moon while counting the stars
xNotUnderstood
I am Delin! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/09/11 | Reply
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i do to. Have you seen the works by Felcie, SakuraDust, Ritona Raito, Tayeta, Hanako Sho, or any of those other big name artists. Those are works that are amazing, the only thing cool about my works are my Quotes
Don't lose the moon while counting the stars
xNotUnderstood
I am Delin! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/09/11 | Reply
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well everyone sucks at first, thats why you practice and keep doin it until you think your getting better. It took me a long time to get to the point im at, and i still suck
Don't lose the moon while counting the stars
xNotUnderstood
I am Delin! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/09/11 | Reply
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yeah, thats why i made my challenge
Don't lose the moon while counting the stars
xNotUnderstood
I am Delin! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/09/11 | Reply
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yes. To me, the text should be really appealing and not the image its self.
Don't lose the moon while counting the stars
xNotUnderstood
I am Delin! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/09/11 | Reply
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well S'thank ya. I try to do new things with my Typography now that im very interested in it
Don't lose the moon while counting the stars
xNotUnderstood
I am Delin! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/09/11 | Reply
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Its called Typography, and i wanted to make the text on both sides. I didnt mean for it to look like that, but hey i kinda like it. Looks like text shadows off his hands
Don't lose the moon while counting the stars