thank you for the help on that. i appreciate it greatly, im still trying to work on my typography and improve it.
see i dont know how to explain how im saving my images. but i have been told that the images look a little messy. i dont know how to fix that, but thank you for pointing it out.
The damn south has gotten to me lately. improper grammar and i dont notice it, i will differently try and fix that. Being on summer break can screw with you sometimes lol.
I appreciate the help. thank you very much
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Thank you for that. im trying to think positive and remember every wonderful moment we had, but then i start thinking "well...there wont be anymore of that" and then i start crying again. but thank you
Okay, I'm not trying to be mean, but since I see room and hope for improvement I would like to give you my 2 cents...
Nice work with your typography on this one. I've noticed you like to bunch both the focal point (character) of the image and the typography together, making the card look cramped and not well planned. I suggest working more with your typography (like this), and maybe consider spacing your typography further away from the character(s) in your cards. You did a nice job with this card, since you worked with the space you were given, and it doesn't seem to interfere with the character.
Also, I would like to say the quality of this card has improved compared to your previous submissions. I don't know what you did differently with saving this file, but I would like to see more like this from you. It doesn't look as pixelated as your usual work.
Lastly, I would also like to point out that your grammar is incorrect. The card should read 'you're' or 'you are' instead of 'your'.
Again, this is nothing personal. I just wanted to share my opinions/advice with you. Feel free to take it or leave it.
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Now on to the actual meaning of the card...
I'm very sorry to hear about the loss of your grandfather. Having a grandparent pass is always a difficult stage in someone's life. I hope that you find comfort in family and friends who share your same thoughts and feelings, and that you are able to move on and become stronger from this experience. I've also lost both my grandmother and grandfather, and am able to happily remember them. Once this sad storm blows over, you will also be able to look back and remember him with a smile.
xNotUnderstood
I am Delin! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/06/11 | Reply
@Ritona:
thank you for the help on that. i appreciate it greatly, im still trying to work on my typography and improve it.
see i dont know how to explain how im saving my images. but i have been told that the images look a little messy. i dont know how to fix that, but thank you for pointing it out.
The damn south has gotten to me lately. improper grammar and i dont notice it, i will differently try and fix that. Being on summer break can screw with you sometimes lol.
I appreciate the help. thank you very much
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Thank you for that. im trying to think positive and remember every wonderful moment we had, but then i start thinking "well...there wont be anymore of that" and then i start crying again. but thank you
Don't lose the moon while counting the stars
Ritona
Hunter (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/06/11 | Reply
Okay, I'm not trying to be mean, but since I see room and hope for improvement I would like to give you my 2 cents...
Nice work with your typography on this one. I've noticed you like to bunch both the focal point (character) of the image and the typography together, making the card look cramped and not well planned. I suggest working more with your typography (like this), and maybe consider spacing your typography further away from the character(s) in your cards. You did a nice job with this card, since you worked with the space you were given, and it doesn't seem to interfere with the character.
Also, I would like to say the quality of this card has improved compared to your previous submissions. I don't know what you did differently with saving this file, but I would like to see more like this from you. It doesn't look as pixelated as your usual work.
Lastly, I would also like to point out that your grammar is incorrect. The card should read 'you're' or 'you are' instead of 'your'.
Again, this is nothing personal. I just wanted to share my opinions/advice with you. Feel free to take it or leave it.
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Now on to the actual meaning of the card...
I'm very sorry to hear about the loss of your grandfather. Having a grandparent pass is always a difficult stage in someone's life. I hope that you find comfort in family and friends who share your same thoughts and feelings, and that you are able to move on and become stronger from this experience. I've also lost both my grandmother and grandfather, and am able to happily remember them. Once this sad storm blows over, you will also be able to look back and remember him with a smile.
"You won't like me when I'm psychoanalyzed."
xNotUnderstood
I am Delin! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/06/11 | Reply
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thank u for that ^^
Don't lose the moon while counting the stars