Ah, very cool, Erin-chan!
Despite the absence of your Prismas, the color still came out excellent in my opinion (I sure wish I could color like that!).
The facial-expression is very well-done.
That simplistic look of pleased excitement is hard to draw so that it looks natural, but regardless, you still pulled it off to its fullest.
Takuya looks great with a hat.
The white compliments his colors well, as well as the colors of his clothes.
One thing I've been meaning to suggest for Takuya's design is changing the sweater/shirt he wears over his under-shirt.
The tail on his red sweater, as well as the blue one here, would look much better id you made them longer, in my opinion.
I know it was something you sort of wanted in his design, but the ultra-short shirt-tail looks a little bit too feminine.
Just something to think about as you progress with his design.
You may also want to make the definition on the neck and upper-chest a little bit less defined. Though it's a nice accurate detail to include, it's a bit to prominent.
But as far as everything else goes, it looks great.
Wonderful sense of color-design, Erin-chan. They flow very well together; something I'm still working on.
Your skin-tone is also spot-on, so points for that as well. ~_^
All around, great work Erin-chan. Job well done.
Aw! I love the ears! I have a soft-spot for them pointy-ears^_~
I can see a little bit more grainyness in the coloring but it's not bad at all. I think you still did a great job!
Hmm... yeah, I do see a difference with the coloring. But it isn't bad. You did your best with what you had to work with. Working under different circumstances and still creating good art shows how talented you are. Good job! ^_^
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