i think her face is too short, his head is too wide (from that angle), his neck it too long, his forearm is too short, and his wrist is too wide. Otherwise its a very original idea (cute) and good use of motion.

y did u comment on your own art? thats dumb.

looks good! it would probably be easier to look at if the lines were darker... and not on lined paper (but I was famous of doing that for a while too)

its ok .........:D