Holy schnikees, Logan...this is great! I was honestly shocked when I saw it...I think I'm so used to seeing zombie drawings from you, I wasn't expecting this! Is this going to be one of the main characters in your manga?
I'm most impressed with the jacket. The wrinkles are perfectly placed and it looks nice, casual and baggy.
I love the streaks your put in the goggles. I tend to note things like that with reflective items and you did it wonderfully!
Now, this is something that I don't know is a style that you wish to keep or not...but the eyes seem to far away from the mouth and cheeks. If you look at a person...be it real or anime, you'll notice their cheeks stick out the most directly below the eye.
I would also work on the shape of the nose a bit. It looks a bit square as opposed to curved.
I wont comment on the coloring since I have a feeling it's the scanners fault it looks a little dull.
Well, I must say, overall great work! I think this is my fave drawing from you!
Great pic! I'm sorry that your scanner killed the colors but I think it still looks great. ^^ You're style's changed greatly and you're definitely improving. ^^
-Rosa
The Wandering Elf (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/13/06 | Reply
Excellent work! I really like this picture. The jacket looks especially good. Your attention to detail has always impressed me ^_^ Keep up the good work, I'd love to see more like this.
First off, I'd like to say wonderful job on the color, I can see how your scanner killed it, but I can also guess what colors were used originally. I can see how many shades of brown you used on the jacket to make it look like real leather, and I would guess that there's a little more shading on the fuzzy stuff around the shoulders to make it look more--well, fuzzy. That's one thing my scanner has issues with; it never picks up pale grays or blues, so if I want the shading to show up, I have to do it really dark.
One thing I would fix is his face shape. The eyes and mouth look great, but the nose and cheek are kinda odd looking. I think it's that the curve of the cheek bone is too low, and the nose isn't quite pointed enough. It makes the eyes seem like they're way to high on the forehead.
Hmm, what else? Oh, I have to complement your improvement on the hips and legs. They're looking much more proportional and not as small. (besides necks and shoulders, hips are something I tend to focus on ^_~). Also, I like the faint blush on his cheeks; makes him look like he's just been out in the cold or something--hence the jacket, right?
Anyway, good job on this! I'm definitely seeing improvement! ^_^
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