hey,pretty good comic series.But Kokoii-matoku is right ,you should take your time,your capable of alot better art then this,ive seen your other pics and there really good!I think i know how you feel,you have this great idea and you want to show it to other people fast(i should know i use to do it lol)any way just spend more time drawing the charecters,then your likely to get even more replys/comments/votes.Any wat keep up the good work!^-^

That was a bit confusing i guess its me keep forgetting witch way to go! XD but this was cute it looks like you rushed, don't rush take your time ^^- the longer you take the better the results! hee hee.