I really enjoyed this work, I spent alittle time looking at it and I Can not spot any huge flaws, the only thing I can say is maybe the hands need alittle work (the guy's hands).

this came out extremly good ^.^ wow..your talented indeed

yea... now it would be even greater if i could read what it says.....

this is... wow... no words are fit to desciribe this pic! it came out beautiful -awesome! you rock! really, you are the definition of a profesional manga artist... cool two thmbs up!

Pls.. give me critics... Yo! This is the translation : -jadi? : "so?" -apa setelah ini : "So, after this..." -kau kan lakukan tugasmu sebagai : "U will do Ur job as...."