Like Kokkoii-Matoku said, you have great potential! Just keep at it and practice, and you could become one of the best!

^-^you have great portential to draw but her face looks a little long and if i'm not mistaken if you wanted this but it seems to me that she has not one but two shurirgan *excuse my spelling* eyes ^^- if you want it long keep it that way i was just pointing it out if you didn't want it that way nyah! i think your scanner did mess this up it looks like you created this with a black pestal pencil. n.n hope that helped you should try her in another pose ^-^