i agree with Chisaki. It IS a bit too round. Just stare at your own head in the mirror and try to sketch that. I don't care what they say, sketching yourself isn't bad. Acctually, i would like to see a self sketch from you.

me liky her hair... but is very sad that she is crying! and A tip, she is too... round. maybe using the egg-shaped head will help a bit... (please don't hate me! I'm just trying to help!)