This is cute! It needs a little work,but it's cute! Angelic Bliss,you need to think be 4 you speak. Things others say in comments can hurt people when it's rude,so watch your mouth,got that? And that also goes for you,blueeyesangel. She probably worked hard on this! Well,I like it. Hope we can be friends! ^^
~Tsu-san~
It looks way too elementary. The lines aren't solid, they're far too scratchy and uneven. The faces are also uneven, especially the girl's. The top part of her head is also too big. It looks bulbous.
Sorry, but I honestly think that people should only draw OC pairings if they have the developed skill to do it nicely. Having more creative OCs also seem to help. Maybe more detail into how they look.
Maybe you should take a look at some of the OC pairing pictures drawn by some real developed artists on this site. People like chibi saiyan 123 have some good OC pairing art. However the best OC pairings and other couple pairings that I have ever seen are done by OJaganshi, Hieis Dark Kitten, Akane The Fox, and MilkyCat.
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