This one is really good, too. I agree with Miyoko-chan about the ear, though. The top of the ear should be level with the bottom of his eye. You are getting better with the hands but to me, the fingers seem to look a bit too long. (i know you like the hands on this one but I'm trying to give a good critique so don't hurt me! *hides in a corner*) I'm not an expert at hands or anything but maybe if you make the palms longer and the fingers a little short then maybe they'll look more realistic. I'm looking at my own hand right now and it looks like that my middle finger is about the same length as my palm (its actually just a bit shorter than my palm). Try looking at your own hand to see what I'm talkin' about. Look at the proportions and hopefully that might help. ^__^ But I love everything else. The details are great, as always. ^^ Can't wait to see more from you! ^^ -Rosa

Your art isn't very good, you should just stop drawing. It's not even anime, and you flame people with real talent. tsk tsk.

Ah, once again the problem with the ears rears it's ugly little head. Just move them down a bit, and it would look fine ^^ His expression is exquisite, by the way. I love all of the detail on his mouth and nose--he really looks scared and surprised, like he has a shotgun barrel pointed at his face. Bravo! Ah, your hands are looking a lot better! They have more shape to them, but I will say that the pinky on his right hand is a bit too long, and same for his thumb on the left. Remember that pinkies and thumbs are always a fair amount shorter than the rest of the fingers. I love his jacket, all of the wrinkles, stains, and rips are very detailed and cool looking. Especially the splatter on his chest--it looks like he's a really messy eater or something. Good job, Logan-kun!