Not bad at all, yanno -^^- Arm is a little long, but I mean, extended slender limbs are almost a must in animes >> Unproportionately beautiful bodies are something that most animes have so XD Like the idea, seems like a moment in a fanfic/original story you wrote out (or thought out, whichever) :3 nice chain extensions and the wings are so kawaii Color it. You can fix mistakes (or cheat like I do and make them less noticable XD) and it would just look even better so :3 Keep it up -Kaoru

that's really cool! i think you did a good job on this. can't wait to see the colored version! :D