You're coloring job is fantastic, even if it did take you forever (give or take a few hours) to do. The dimensioning/proportioning of her could use a little work, but I think it looks great!

face is too long. forehead is nonexistant, ears too high, breasts too flat, shoulders lack shape, abdomen too long, fingers too thin, needs wrists to separate hand from arm, needs elbows, no no caratoid muscle (neck), bellybutton too long, nice color

^_^' ehh, at first glance I thought that it was a guy because of the face... but other than that its pretty cool... I esp like the coloring on the fins!

Uh, her face is too long.