I have to agree with Living Doll on this one. My favorite thing about this fanart is Melfina's face and especially her eyes. I also commend you on the shadows/shading...I have trouble with that on my fanarts :P

Why didn't I see this earlier?! This is fantastic! Melfina is so cute, and you did a really nice job! I especially love how you drew and shaded her hair. Her eyes look really good, too. I hope to see more from you!

this drawing is pretty good and its something i would draw