Are you flippin' serious? I saw her, and I tweaked. I absolutly love the shading, and her eyes are awesome. Again, you with the details on the gun. The straps are perfect, fluid, not stiff. Her eyes are awesome, but I think I just said that. To be honest, i think you should try more manga styled art, and maybe even try to do manga. You're a great story writer, and definatly have talent where drawings concerned. Maybe you could mix 'em together a bit and make an actual manga?