Just keep practicing. you can draw hair and eyes fine already. Just try to make them more proportional and natural. (Sauske's shoulder is higher than the other) XD Otherwise IT'S GREAT!!

so i see this is sasukes? cousin? someone he's been training? ok ^^- well her chin is a little out of place. you should really ink and color this ^^- and try to use up more space. like bigger drawings of them. i see potenial keep it up nyah!