That's cute. I like how the rose and the tie are the only splashes of color in the design. That would be even cooler if the rose were the same reddish shade as the ribbon tie.
Two things that would make this picture look a lot better are stronger outlines (the outlines of his shirt get lost in all the grey coloring) and about twice as much time spent coloring.
Smaller strokes look neater and less rushed than long ones, and I think that would make this look a lot better. It would also look a little cleaner if the sky colors came right up against the cloak and hair.
Anyway, thumbs up.
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