Hmmm...okay, I'm saying this all in a nice, helpful sort of way, so don't be offended at all, okays? My biggest challenge when drawing is doing profiles, and these profiles need a bit of work. They kinda look like monkeys. In a good way! lol See, you got the right curve, but it needs to stop slightly pointed, then come back in a little; then (underneath the nose, as it would be) the face would then come pretty much straight downward, except for the lips, then pull in towards the back of the head to make the chin. Oh, and their arms are a little short. But I really like the crying in the box, the big buggy watery eyes make me smile. ^___^ lol Hope my comment helps you.

Not to discourge but the hands are really small, if shuichi was in that pose his hands would be behind him a bit, the faces look..way to..buggly..im sorry to say..it also seems that Yuki is wearing a skirt..is that him? the box can be passed cause when you cry it can sometimes be all siggly like that but the eye is bigger then the other, don't worry don't NOT draw anymore this is the essance of practing ^-^ ok?