Pretty bad. It could defenatly be improved.

if you practice anatomy, you could make this look a lot better ^_^ other than some anatomy and proportion issues, this is cool.

NIce sketch.

Well, you need some practice on arms.... a lot... But so do I... And.... Did you really got o Japan?!

Are there any comments on how to improve on it? ^.^

You went to Japan?! I'm so jealous! ;P Did you go recently? How was it? I'm hoping to save enough money to go there sometime in the next year or so; any tips on what to do there or anything? Anyway =), the pic is good just work on body proportions