It looks much better than any of my drawings, so don't worry about it

Much improved from the original. But yeah- I was gonna suggest one of those wooden doll-figure-model things too (you know what I mean, right? I don't know what they're called. >_

hmph, i got a ques silthfox, and ill try to help you in a "nicer way"(even though it wasn't mean) but when you draw, do you use a stick figure to get the pose right b4 u start, cuz if you dont, that would probobly help, anyway, just my peice

Sorry to say but it isnt very good. :/

Thank you so much! but now I see what I did wrong my the arm, it's not lined up to the shoulder as it should.

much better than the original ^_^ though the arm still look a bit disjointed. But what you did helped a lot *claps*