I like it! She is such an great character. I like the tones used, I think you have enough criticism so I won't repeat anything. Keep up the love in your pics! XD
This is soooo cute!!! I hate having to criticize it!
The top section of her right arm *being on the left side of the page* is a little too small. Both parts of the arm should be about equal length. (the lower half should be a little longer, but not too much) In that angle, it's really hard to draw all of that, though....
Her left shoulder *being on the right side of the page* should be closer to her body, bringing that whole arm a little closer. The lower half of the arm on the left side looking at the page should curve into the wrist a little sooner, making her arm more slender.
One last thing: her neck should probably bend a little with her head. It looks fine as it is, but it's just a suggestion.
*GOMEN!!!! >.> I said more than I thought I would...*
teehee, lurve the plushies. her right arms is a little thick compared to her body. it makes sense if ur trying perspective, just that the higher half of the arm (if that makes sense) should be thin like her left arm. thats all, tho. really cute, and the shading is nice.
~minto
shading and l inework are awesome! great job! one thing, lil work on the hands. yea i know they are super hard and annoying and all that... im not that great at them myself. other than that it looks good.
luv da plushies!!! cuuutte!
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