The hand on the right needs work, That's the only thing wrong really... all in all this is good job. ^_^

4 hours? WOW ^ I never able to made manga that fast ^^ Btw, U should pay mopre attention in his hand. Compare it with Ur own hand ^^ I don;t know how to explain the mistakes since my English is horrible If U created depth in Inking, U will do a great jobs! I like Ur art. U still young and have such a great talent. When I'm in Ur age, I still don;t know how to draw ^^

LOL... in labor... i thought he was on the wall XD

To Stephen my love: First of all, it's not a 'she', it's a 'he'. And second of all, it's supposed to be a dream; nightmare, since he IS just waking up from bed. Third and final, "Unngh!!" is a sound effect. There's a lot of that in manga, and you do a lot, too. We all do. And to the rest of you all: Thank you so much for the wonderful comments!! + saeki:midori

thats AWSOME!!! XD i cant wait till u make more! X3 even though there r only 2 up so far, im already LUVIN it!!! i cant wait wha happens next! XD keep up the GREAT job! ^^ later -ska8tergirl.

it's really good. you did good on one and two. .make more cause there good