the anatomy is slightly off. The colors are a little to into the orange vectors. Or maybe that's just a scanner problem. or perhaps it's the media yourusing. and the top of inuyasha's head... that doesn't make very much logical sence. It's like it just cuts off If you look at the laws of comic books that would be a bad move. there's a certain place where you shouldn't cut off. like the very tip tip of inuyasha's head it's okay to cut off the way you did with kagome of kikio but the way you cut it on inuyasha.. naw that's not okay. so you should watch out for that in the future. and you might want to try using value a little more. like kagomes shoulder looks like it's popping out. Which isn't okay. gauge the preasure you put on your stencil. that's the key to value. and getting to your anatomy problem. Inuyashas head looks a bit to wide. and kagome's face is off centered. and kikio's eyes are off a bit. and kagomes ears are off a bit. you should try to shape them a little better. and add value to the center of her ear. instead of just the sides. it looks wierd.
sorry if I sound harsh or whatever. I'm just pointing out every error. I could point out all your strong points but you wouldn't learn as much. over all it's a great drawing and I like the way you did inuyashas hair. and your line quality is exceptionally fine.
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