its nice i think if you keep practicing you could go somewhere but i think her arm is a little to big and her hand holding the rose dosent make sense maby it would help if you imagend how it would look like if you was in the pose or pose in the mirrow its also help if you use plain wait paper line paper make it look crapy your coloring could use some help as well there to much white showing try to make shines in the hair and darken areas to shad the other then those things its ok
I think it's VERY creative. :D I especially like the hair. Reminds me of a bumblebee. (Ha, I'm the rhyming master.) And I like that name...BLACK ROSE NINJA AWAYYYYYY!!!!
Tips. Umm...maybe want to use better quality paper. I used to use plain white computer paper. :) The coloring does need work, but I think it's great anyways. ^_^ Keep it up!
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