That's not all you need to work on, Im afraid. You need to place hers ears so that they actually look like they are coming out from the sides of her head a bit. It's more realistic and less 'Looney Toon' that way. Your hands sure do need work too. For one thing, I can't tell which finger is the thumb or the pinky. Also, her posture is very odd and akward looking. If her head is facing forwards towards the dogs, then so should the rest her body. Her other shoulder shouldn't be visible and her neck wouls be curved towards the dogs as well. You also need to move her eye a little bit back. It's much too close the the edge of her face and she needs to have more of an actual expression on her face. You need to move her hair line as well, it makes her forehead look way to big. Her clothes also look way to flat. No curves or folds are visible to actually show the shape of her body and give viewers an idea of what kind of fabric the clothes are. You need to keep trying...