hay its not bad not bad at all its better than my drawings.

ooh, not bad for ur first submission. i like it. i see potential. the only awkward thing is the left leg, the knee is a bit odd. other than that it's a great start. i say just keep drawing people. in fact, find a picture online from an anime u like and try to copy it, just by looking at it and drawing what you see, that will help you with shoulders. great job on this I look forward to the next one!