Hmm, that is definitely an interesting outfit she's got on! lol But I like your work on it, though the pic is a bit blurry. Lemme guess; evil scanner? lol Okay, the only thing about this pic that isn't working for me is her face; the shape of it. It's not rounded enough, and it definitely needs to be slimmer. Now, I know this may just be your style of drawing, but you still might wanna consider changing the facial shapes, since, though it may be how you draw, it's not a very common style, and therefor people aren't very agreeable about it... Well, hope my comments help!! Luv ya! *huggles*