yeh the eyes the waist there are a few faults but its still reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeel good

i think her middle is too wide.

Yeah, I noticed that, too. *sob* Oh well. I'll do better next time. I hope. O.o

It's great for a first try! The only flaw other thatn the eyes is that you drew her just a little bit too wide. But these are understandable mistakes.