pretty good, but a few things need pointed out. pretty good on the hands, but the wrists and elbows need some work. also, eyebrows r a little too thick. when kenshin's mad, his might be bigger than normal, but they're not that bold. they might be suttle and pronouced, but its a touch too much on this pic. also, the lines need to flow more. if you don't like the line, erase it fully, and then try and redraw it in one continuous motion. lastly, not everything that is shaded needs to be outlined. it makes the pic (and his shirt in the case) a little choopy (even though i no its supposed to be torn up). orverall, pretty good though. keep practicing, and i'll be looking for future kenshin entries ^_^x
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PS: just noticed this, but the handle of the sword and the blade r facing two seperate directions. the long end of the hilt should be going the same direction the blade should be pointing. here the blade is at somewhat of an angle. it also seems to be bent downward. just keep this in mind for other pics.
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Senior Otaku | Posted 08/07/06 | Reply