looks good; only thing's the tall girl's chest is a bit high. in response to the previous comment- using a reference is different than tracing. i think most pics here are copied- doesn't mean they were traced, right. you just shouldn't have catagorized this one as "original anime" though, since it's not. :)

That one with the dark clothes has very VERY big boobs. 0_0.

0.o kitties!!!!! they're r cute especaily the little one!