Awww, I really love this!! The way they're standing together is such a sweet pose, I've always loved seeing couples like that, and their loving expressions are sweet enough to make you barf. :3 Maybe that doesn't sound appealing, but I mean it in a good way. lol There is one thing though, I think Lily's face needs to be longer, it looks a little squashed; maybe when you drew her with her eyes closed it threw you off, but it's not a big deal, and overall this is simply a gorgeous work of art.