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    K u r a i

    Senior Otaku | Posted 09/30/06 | Reply

    Dude thats awsome! I really like it! especially the back pose of Es! ^ ^b

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    Otakuite | Posted 09/09/06 | Reply

    wow! i wonder what will happen really curious! nice job and i don't think it's messy at all

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    wonderkid

    Otaku Legend | Posted 09/08/06 | Reply

    It should be interesting to see how things turn out and it's great work as usual.

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    Foxtrot

    Otaku Legend | Posted 09/07/06 | Reply

    OH EM EFF GEE!! *runs in circles* I love your comics!!! SQUUUUEEE!!! Kankuro is a meanie! T^T hmmph. Be nice Kankuro! Es is hella strong! XD ( ' 3 ' ) meep!

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    Otaku Legend | Posted 09/07/06 | Reply

    It may be a little confusing to read, but the illustrations within the panels are good. You just need to work on your organization of the panels so that the reader can follow what's going on clearly. So it's really not bad at all. :)

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    Chibi Artist Girl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/07/06 | Reply

    It may be messy, but it's actually drawn well. I like the fancy pose you did for Es, and the movement flows, but at times it's hard to follow. If you fixed it up a bit, it would be excellent!

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    NaiLaiUryYasha

    Senior Otaku | Posted 09/07/06 | Reply

    i am so confused 0.o?!?!?!