since u were trying to draw renton and eureka the bodys are quite good! =]! time for the bad[im a pro at seeing bad things as i draw bad =)] well u need to make eurekas face a little wider so it can be younger looking...same with rentons. the hair looks good on wureka though its not quite her style but on renton it needs to be more close and not as wavy...also rentons ear is a major issure with this pic.thats all i have to say about the pic =]