sup brandon speaking dued pretty good to others need work but ok take more time

Take more time working on your drawings. It doesn't help to speed, that'll just make your art look bad (trust me, I know). If possible, try inking in your drawing before you scan it, and erase the pencil lines - it looks a lot cleaner. Like what Floopus said, the hands have six fingers. The thumbs are at a different position than all the other fingers. Also, similar to what mamma said - work on your body frame, head shape, the hands, and the hair. Even if you manage to spike all your hair up, there are supposed to be a few strands that hang down. Lastly, do you have photoshop? If you do, use that to help you color your drawings. And if you decided to color with paint for your next drawing, try not to make the background look so neon. Just keep practicing!

And WHY do you take two seconds on it? If you post artwork, ATTEMPT to be good! That ,or please stop making these, it's bad enough with tens of tens of yaoi pics here. So, yeah, DO SOME WORK!!

Ok, seriously?!? How old are you? (No offense!!! Really! I'm not a meanie?) I can understand if your younger but otherwise, you need to work on body frame and head shape... and the hands... and the hair. And are you using Microsoft paint? Becasue i hate using that and it makes all pics look bad. I suggest using photoshop or jsut coloring using colored pencils...