i like the original a lot better and u should go over the lines in ink and the color it =] and the skin looks like it wasnt colored so make it darker to make it show up make the eyes a little more in depth also basically what the person below me said =]
Awesome Person (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/13/06 | Reply
i would have to agree with viles on this one. the markers kind of ruined the clothes. as for the eyes, you could try to put more depth into her eyes (highlights and dark areas. as for the skin tone, you should make it at least two shades darker so it's visible. and another thing, if you color lineart, you shouldn't leave it in pencil. Try to outline it more so it doesn't fall into the picture.
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