You did some things wrong. Her shirt should be a bit longer. The black 'gems' on her glove should be TWO mako ones. She should also have a bandage on that hand. Her suspenders 'attacher' things should have been a bit wider. You should also see adjusters for the suspenders a little below her shoulders. Her hair looks a bit off. Her eyes are crimson, not brown. Last but not least, her earrings are a mako like green, just like the gems.
Oh! Also, where's her ponytail? Her hair is VERY long and please don't tell me you thought it stopped on her upper back?
Other than that, you have a nice artistic ability. Though, thumb down because of those inaccuracies.
Great Job on this piece! The
shading is awesome and so is
the composition! Wish the
lines were just a tad smoother
but that's really hard to get!
That's really all there is to
'complain' about lol. This looks
professional! ;)
NekojinMakaze
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