wow thanks guys but I add a rule to this, the whole construstive criticizm means not beating down yourself. besides I used to be horrible i cant even look at my old stuff thanks a ton anyway. THANKS!

I think It's great!!! mine isn't as half as good as urs!!

Nice Lineart, are you going to color this? that would be awsome ^^. i love the shading. everything is really nice keep it up! Kokkoii-Matokus number one rule: Never Give Up! ^0^!