Well. Not bad. I have some critique/suggestions, though. . Naruto looks the best of the three, though his neck is huge compared to the rest of him. Nice job on his pose and shading, I really like. Next time, maybe you could try more wrinkles on the front of his shirt and the sleeves? It looks too flat, but that's just a minor gripe. I really like your Naurto, not bad at all.
Sasuke's shoulder on the right seems way too big for his body. It really sticks out. That's the really issue there, it really needs to be smaller. Now his shoulders are about twice the size of his waist. However, I like the shading on his shirt. The shading on his head looks extreamly messy, be carefull to get an even coloring job. The head is very good.... I hate 3/4 views and avoid them like the plague....
Sakura. A problem here is the hair and face. The hair is very flat, I don't know really how to say this. It needs to be.... more, alive? Like Naru's hair looks alive. I dunno, this kinda comes from practice. I used to never be able to draw hair. Her face on the left is also a bit slanted. The shading on her is a bit subtle..... I like the strech/wrinckle lines on her shirt, but the shading's a bit off. Trying to make it contrast more next time. I love her expression, it's really cute.
Oh yeah, did I mention I love Sasuke's bandages?
Please don't be discouraged, I think you did a great job on the coloring, and I don't think It's "the worst" at all.
Hope this helps!
Patsuyas
Otakuite | Posted 01/16/07 | Reply
pamplemousse
Senior Otaku | Posted 11/11/06 | Reply