It's a really nice drawing but i suggest you try to colour the skin and other colours darker. Also her arm is too small and her neck is too skinny. Her eyes are my favorite part of the picture. what i think u should also try is to draw on plain paper. It would look soooo much prettier if it where on a plain paper. These are just my opinions and i dont mean to be rude(please try to understand that!! I make these mistakes ALL the time!! Especially with line paper!!) and you dont have to listen to me at all. But all in all it's very cute:)
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