As artists we're always improving. Your art looks better than the stuff I was drawing at your age. It takes time and practice, so don't become discouraged, love
i think if you brought the body back a bit, she'd end up more proportional [cuz if you look at a girl w/ short enough hair or w/ thier hair pulled up, thier head is naturally out in front of the sholders while thier neck streatches to thier back, and thier back sort-of curves in a bit after thier shoulder blades curve out...if i'm making any sense?]
sorry, rambling >_>'''
i don't mean to be critical, this is really a great pic!
The background is supposed to be like a stage, if anyone was wondering. Like the red things are curtains, like she's in a play, and this is Charlotte by the way! ^^
this is really good! I wish I could shade like that. The only thing that I think needs a little tweak is the shoulder. But everything else is very nice! I like the curtains in the background! ^^
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