Well...
1) You're good specialy with poses and hair. They look clean. (my little advice: you should make characters "bigger" - she's too lean)
2) Face - it's not proportional to neck
3) eyes are little too big ant too close
4) work with profile - it's too flat
kuromeru
Senior Otaku | Posted 01/27/07 | Reply
PrettyRose
Otakuite | Posted 01/27/07 | Reply