*instantly faves and votes* Wow sweetheart xD Another long comment ^_____________^ Um� I�ll start with saying the same as before: The line art looks rockin� ^.~ and she nicely proportioned ^_^ I think you could do better at the hands (God are they hard -_-) Um... and the areas of the skin that would be dark, but hey like you said you�re just starting *hugs* On with the great stuff!!!!!!!! X33 � Cute little chibi! I think that�s how I�ll know its Koii�s art. She always (well most of the time) puts a cute little chibi to counterpart with the regular formed character ^_^ Kawaii~! � Since Safaia is kneeling straight like that I think the red you used evens out the picture with it�s horizontal looking spread (lol spread da butter xD) � The folds of the skirt look neat! Maybe that�s because AGAIN your great with highlighting black and white ^__^ The shirt�s folds look nice too! Keep looking at fold and practicing! You�re really getting it to look better! W0000000t! So yeah, the clothes look great. The coloring looks---- squee! X333 � The legs are nicely drawn! I don�t even think I could do that with reference xD You�re awesome! You did VERY well on the shiny/lighter parts of her legs. � The socks (heck the whole foot no leg O.O) look wonderful! The grey shading adds to the picture. It just some gray coloring, but no REALLY the little detailing or whatever you put ADD up and make the WHOLE thing therefore really appealing to the eyes. Yum! xDDDDDD Don�t forget that yo! � I like the way you drew Safaia on the side of the paper like that instead of just in the middle. And then with her facing to the left like that- superb! � Lastly, the color choices!!! She has blue hair and eyes- and you did a red background! You used color opposites (well actually I think it�s opposite is green, but this does just as well)! Yaaaaaaaaaaay!! ^o^ Your really doing goo Kokkoii!! ^_____________^ *glomp* Keep at it!!!! Sorry I took so long to type =^_^=;;; How did that line go? "No one can touch this!" Tah-hah! xD *hug*

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