this is very well done. and it is REALLY colorful. it reminds me of my friend Sakanako. im sorry to say that i just dont get the whole naruto-kun having a long lost cousin u know? and well maybe u could have this character like narunaru. i dunno. dont listen to me though. just do what u think is right for this character ^^ -ooka-chan!!! ^^

This is really cute, and it's nice. the coloring is really cute. the writing sorta throws it off thou in the back. but. i dont even think naruto can have a cousin either -sweatdrops- When making an oc, you try your best not them have any reltions with the real ones. but then just do as you wish, it's your charater, just telling ya how to make her fit better. and to make her seem like a good oc and not a bad. but thats just my opion. just trying to help out and what not, dont take any of this flamming or anything it's not its just, that kinda can't happen. what you could do it make her for your own story. ^^ Kokkoii-Matokus number one rule: Never Give Up! ^^