first nice pic, but yes it could use some work :P and second HEY!! I was helping you with hands!!! *humph* you also need to work on body forms.. your girls are so skinny!!!

Eh, yeah, it does look a little chunky :p I need to work on my hair ^-^ I'm finally slowly (very slowly) getting better on hands... Take one step at a time and before you know it, you're a mile farther than where you began! Thanks for the criticism!