Hero of Thyme (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/02/07 | Reply
(((i think you've gotten enough hype on the sasuke neji thing so i'll just skip that part)))
too....many...weapons!!!!
it's a wonder how he...she.... it gets around
~Colleen the Great~ X_X
p.s. your age shouldn't make a difference i'm 13 too and my OC's come out pretty original (i just don't post em'). also people aren't here to be nice they're here to give their opinion. you're suppose to read them and use them to make improvements. sdo if i was the artist and i read the comments i would think "hmmm...maybe this means i should be more creative next time" of course that's only one person's opinion
hm...nothing wrong with this. i mean if you like your own character to look like sasuke and neji combined then go ahead.*shrug* i'm not going to get all hyped up. i'm not here to say crap about who is the person, i'm here to comment on your style of art, and by looking at the drawing, i can tell you spent a lot fo time detailing...well good job with that...
Yeah, thats all where saying, you could be WAY more creative then that, just flaunt it. ^-^
you do that on paint? its good. keep up the good work, and be more creative and orignal! ^^
Kokkoii-Matokus number one rule: Never Give Up!
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I'm sorry, but your OC does look like a rip off of Sasuke and Neji. You can try to be more original in you next Naruto OC. Try to be creative and think of new things ^^
hey, this is cool. it may look like sasuke and neji, but that's fine. it's oringinal, and it's Shinira's, so it's ok. u did a good job on this! i like!
you said you saw everyone making there own naruto oc well that's right but theres dont sucks and i'll tell you two reason why your's suck one reason is because it look's to much like saskue and neji matter of fact it look's like both of them mixed and second the wepons well some of the are out of proportion and the kuni in his right hand is way to big well sorry about being so mean but keep drawling you will get better
Damn, sorry dude, but..that looks like neji, and sasuke mixed together. only thing you changed was making a yinyang mark on his shirt.
Good as work thou, but you took this pose from when sasuke did it. your artwork is good but be more oringal dude.
Hell..
*Copy pasta from a Naruto Mary-Sue Litmus Test*
Does the OC become a fourth team member?
Is the OC's love interest a member of the team they're on?
Is everyone else on the team either jealous or in love with the OC as well?
Does the OC claim to be too good to need a team?
Is the OC there primarily to be the love interest of a canon character?
Is any other, canon love interest of the canon character dealt away with or turned into a complete bitch/bastard in order to facilitate the canon character and OC forming a relationship?
If you insist that Sakura/Ino/Hinata/whoever was a complete raging bitch before, stop here.
Does the OC win every battle they're in?
Except when the time comes for them to be saved by their love interest?
Was the OC Gaara or Narutos 'only friend' when they were a child?
Bloodline Abilities:
Does the OC have a new bloodline limit or ability that has never shown up in canon before?
Is it a bloodline limit or ability to completely pwn all others--ability to copy other bloodline limits, ability to create an army out of thin air, ability to stop time, Kyukaku (the hybrid of Kyuubi and Shukaku), so on and so forth?
Is the OC a demon or a half-demon?
That thus needs Naruto or Gaara to understand them?
If the OC is a full demon, do they claim to be the mate of either Kyuubi or Shukaku?
Does the OC have cat/dog ears and/or a tail?
That don't detract from their beauty in any way?
Their Past:
Does the OC have a traumatic past?
Does the OC constantly bring attention back to their angsty past? (Ie: "I'd enjoy the sunset...BUT I CAN'T BECAUSE I'M IMMORTAL, OH NOES!")
Does the OC not react to their traumatic past in ways that a real person would? Do research on psychological scarring if youre not sure. No, psychological scarring isn't the same as wangsting.
Has the OC attained the rank of genin/chuunin/jounin at an extremely young/exceptional age?
Does the OC refer to A or S-class missions as 'easy'?
Give yourself one point per 'yes' answer unless otherwise indicated. Be honest--if you're not, you'll never improve. A few points doesn't necessarily make a Mary Sue. Remember that canon females can be turned into Sues as well
Kokkoii-Matokus number one rule: Never Give Up!
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can u say rip off? maybe not maybe so but anyway, im not flamming u er anything but u really should be more creative with costumes and hair styles. im just saying u should probably change the way this OC looks before someone comes over here and bites ur head off about it. cuz people will. im just warning u... (ive seen it happen~~~)
-ookamirox
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